Tha Heart

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    this is not very gud but i thought of it off the dome and i typed it so here it is comment and rate

    Tha Heart

     Tha Heart is very complex 
    Tha Heart is very hard headed
    It has no remorse 
    It goes after what it wants and is attached
    Tha heart wants what it wants 
    &nd tha heart never descriminates 
    It likes what it likes 
    &nd one day it could be you or you or you or me 
    Tha heart is very soft
    So when yhu have it in your hands make sure you are gentle and kind
    because if yhu aren't and yhu break it it just might break you!

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    cmlestrade commented on Tha Heart

    09-12-2009

    Very good representation of what I can only term as a warning of poetic justice. it is true that some of us think with our hearts instead of our minds. That's why we're the poets and artists of the world.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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