The Ideal You

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    The Ideal You

    “The Ideal you”


    If I could build a perfect mate I would start at the bottom with a solid foundation, then to carve my way up to courage and honesty. I would give great detail to commitment, with an equal essence of innocence too.

    If I could have an Ideal you, I would plaster you with strength to carry me when I am weak, then smother you with understanding, so that you could intercede for me when
    circumstances are greater than you or I. I would paste integrity all over you, knowing that you would stand for what you believe.

    If I could mold an immaculate you, there would be an ounce or two of arrogance, showing the confidence of who you are. I couldn’t go too much further without adding humor; the recipe for healthy living is laughter. I would give you a deserved portion of intellect and desire. This would keep you on the continuous quest to know more and never stop.

    Finally, I would give you a good sprinkle of humility, a dash of tenderness, and a hearts load of love, you will need this to go to the Father for knowledge and wisdom. Now I can seal you with a kiss and sign you with gratitude, for I have “The Ideal You!”



    Missval ,09

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    klassik commented on The Ideal You

    09-03-2009

    you are a poet! no wasted motions, loved this piece while!

    Kdaddy commented on The Ideal You

    08-29-2009

    I enjoyed this read. Your analogy use was perfect. Thanks for sharing.

    Hamma commented on The Ideal You

    03-10-2009

    i could you add a dose of some of those things to myself.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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