THE FRIEND writes/back

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    THE FRIEND writes/back
    When you feel tattered or worn...
    It's not I that shall be scorned.
    For I have not forgotten the friend in you.
    Remember our kiss and how you knew...
    It marks a friendship with-in my soul.
    As we grow together;grey and old.
    Our true friendship will always mend.
    I can hold you if you perish or decend...
    Ingrained in friendship with-in my heart.
    It is you instilled in my thoughts that I start.
    Come and walk with me thru the wind or breeze.
    I am your and i'm asking you please...
    For mountains may wash away ,crumble or fall...
    It's our friendship and you that I will call.
    I am your soul,as you are my blood and breath
    I'm going to love you far pass death...

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    TyMartin commented on THE FRIEND writes/back

    04-01-2009

    I really felt your emotion and love. It brought tears to my eyes I understand to love something or someone like that!
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    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    I'm apoligizing for my delay on response.I've been rather busy!I didn't want to make anyone cry and to feel better theres other selections i wrote that will make you smile instead.like I Saw Him...Ty for you value of a gift I believe we both share and It's called Love,God Bless you.

    Realistic commented on THE FRIEND writes/back

    01-29-2009

    Shows great devotion here. I like this one lots.
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    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    yes it is a response back to my other poem Do Not Challenge me and i think I very much behind on ty everyone so ty you and God bless.

    libra46 commented on THE FRIEND writes/back

    01-28-2009

    Nice write,have to look beyond the words.
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    blackfootlady

    12/04/2009

    Good advice ty and God bless

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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