Do not Challenge me For...

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  • Friendship

    Do not Challenge me For...
    I will help you cross the ice...
    I will warm you from the cold.
    I will hold you as you cry.
    I will love you until you die.
    I am just a friend.
    When we depart in journey.
    I will hold you deep in thought....
    For it's your eyes that I have caught.
    Do not challenge me for:
    I am just a friend.

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    Hampton commented on Do not Challenge me For...

    12-07-2009

    There appears to be a warning expressed in this poem for some reason that is not disclosed. Maybe a message that says don't expect more from me than just friendship.
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    Hampton

    12/07/2009

    I rated this poem a 10 and it posted an average score of 8.3. Impossible, as i am the only one to rate it thus far.

    blackfootlady

    12/09/2009

    Hampton,Good to see you on this link.Yes I agree there is something wrong with it and it also was totally overlook so I quit writting for 10 months because of it.I was totally discouraged.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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