RISEN

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  • Allegory

    RISEN
    The river flows to your oceans.
    The mountains risen without notion.
    The sunlight in my eyes;burning...
    The ground motionless;not turning.
    I walk,I stand,I sit,and still...
    I can capture a bird flying at will.
    The moon still out by light;imprisoned.
    Then at that moment i too become risen.

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    libra46 commented on RISEN

    01-28-2009

    This is beautiful poetry and nicely said.
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    blackfootlady

    11/27/2009

    Some times I think it's diffecult for poets to comprehend my work!ty for connecting with this piece of work.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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