The Fight

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    The Fight

    Although the fight was within I had a choice to win;
    but the fight within had just started to begin.

    I fought for so long with this inner demon not understanding his position;
    but as i looked deeper my mind tangled with self intuition.

    I became ingulped in this battle not wanting to win;
    In instant I became beaten signified my sin.

    It was too much to handle I had given up the fight;
    chasing the inevitable I gave it all my migh.t

    I fought this feeling of love so long;
    Never thought it would be me singing this sad love song .

    I cheated .... As we greeted ... I didn't want to be defeated....Im fighting today for Forgiveness

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    BTurner commented on The Fight

    09-07-2009

    that is a nice poem. i can relate.....love hurts...yet...it can heal...

    Mosfabulous commented on The Fight

    07-23-2009

    that is a good poen that i have ever read. U have talent to.

    RalphMoore commented on The Fight

    07-04-2009

    nice..soul baring...could be anyone,yet personal at the same time

    cliftondurant commented on The Fight

    04-16-2009

    Beautifully written keep on figting

    saint010 commented on The Fight

    03-22-2009

    i love it!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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