The Day I became smart

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The Day I became smart

Please open the sky Lord.
Let the past be the past.
Falling South, The reaper is only steps away..
As demons in the dark stabbing at my heart..

Had enough.. Changing directions..
Pain turns into change..
We need you now Oh.. Lord

Missing piece to make complete.
A battle was never won by one person.
Need a power greater than myself.
Found a rose in the desert.
Pages explain a better way.
Down the path I follow.

The taste of victory that travels threw suffering.
In to a nother life.
The fight is over..
Pain turns into change.

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copergirl commented on The Day I became smart

01-27-2010

How profound! Pain and change--oh yes. This is very good--the kind of stuff that seems to write itself

kage commented on The Day I became smart

01-26-2010

this work is great maybe need more down to earth ways to explain what you are saying however it is a great work man you need to keep writing

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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