My Dog treats me better than she does

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  • Lost Love
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  • Confusion
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  • Anger
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  • Loss

    My Dog treats me better than she does

     Never judge a book by it's cover.
    Fooled by her angel eyes.
    Speechless, Parolizing slience, suffering.
    For one second I felt her pain.
    Then the drama came.

    OH.. Why
    Anger has never solved anything.
    Anger kills people.
    Just calm down and think..

    Left alone with a reflection of her memory.
    Faceing a ghost everyday
    Theres no escaping her even when she's gone,
    Her argument lives on.
    i fell too hard for her, Now im in this dark hole.
    Not even the bottle can drown her out.
    My dear I Just don't give a damn.

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    BikemanRJ commented on My Dog treats me better than she does

    03-21-2010

    Funny how we can be left feeling this way after a argument or a break up. Just don't try to drown her out with the bottle it will give you a bigger headache than the one you just got rid of . Good poem BikemanRJ
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    Mandi commented on My Dog treats me better than she does

    01-27-2010

    I love the title. It should tell of things to come, but you never mention the dog again. You need to do more refering to how the dog treats you better theme. It's a great idea. Use the rest of your lines for a piece that follows that theme. YOu've got two or three different themes rolled into one poem. Breakk it up and add related lines to each theme. Do you get what I am saying?
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    eddiebealjr

    01/27/2010

    yea i understand i was just trying to sum up at the start of the song that she is not worth my time because my dog treats me better than here, but i didn't say anything about a dog. lol thats just my style sometimes i just think of something crazy as a tile and it don't even have those words in the song. thanks for being a honest person!

    Musicmynded1 commented on My Dog treats me better than she does

    01-27-2010

    Great again eddie.................. what else can i say,, it'd b good to hear it,,, try a site called musicianmatch.com and look me up.. Im eddie on there (lol) u can put ur music on there, it's a good site.
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    kage commented on My Dog treats me better than she does

    01-26-2010

    good work i like it , the words are well put together and it all makes sense in the end .
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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