the culpability

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    the culpability

     The guilty glance
    Flies across the room
    Noticeable is her  by your side
    Ought  to get an obstruction
    On to lay my attention
    We wouldn't want to be unveiled now
    would we???
    can feel the scathing heat
    of your  stolen gaze 
    Me attempts not  to raise my shameful  face
    Though Can't stop the reminiscence
    of a one continuate  afternoon
    I shiver
    can't deny it had its candor
    But the culpability I bear
    outweighs it all.

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    bforibus commented on the culpability

    10-17-2009

    i love thhe chaotic rhyming scheme of this poem. its beauty was its own sin. and in these characters eyes living in sin was a better fate then not living them. great job
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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