HAUNTING ERR

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ONE OF MY BEST IN 2010.............READ ON.

HAUNTING ERR

In the cold of the nite I stare
Appraising the calm air
Of the breezy warm weather
which by reservations I bear

I reverie the quitness
Apart from the strange creepiness
A depressing coldness
Damping my heart in its clamminess

Thoughts of you tumble in my mind
In a dizzying gyre they grind
The frosty drill of their rind
leave me wishing your memories to unbind

we had set out, two souls unbridled
Ravaging passions bundled
scourging fires kindled
Entwined spirits entangled

To hike the hill we set our mettle
Oblivious to ensuing battle
Fears sealed in a bottle
By love brimming from our kettle

Then struck the blizzard
Cast by an evil wizard
Veiled in a 'friendly' vizard
Filled stones in our gizzard

Spirits cast into a freak
Going forth seemingly bleak
we abandoned our vie for a peak
The band we inevitably had to break

Hanging on emotional cliffs now we bleed
Longing for a need to heed
But we dishonored our creed
It could never be the same indeed

BY PRETTYKAN82

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

Prettykan82’s Poems (28)

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PLAYBOY SYNDROME 1
PRIVATE EMOTIONS 0
HAUNTING ERR 0
THE TREE BY MY BEDROOM WINDOW 3
AT THE EDGE 0
THE PASSION OF A DREAM 0
My restless sparrow 1
ITS JUST THE ME I HAVE TO OFFER 0
YOU SPOKE 1
Reminisce -Our Village X-Mas 1
love's ocean 0
My country, my motherland...
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0
the crush 0
why now 0
I will be there..... 1
why we loved her 0
your love..... 0
The poison 0
My rare gem 1
Am yet to comprehend...
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0
The silent tear 0
the culpability 1
Today, its just the YOU I wish for..........
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0
That smile 0
Taking a walk....... 0
My Dream........
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1
Afraid to take the step 1
FUNNY HOW 0