The Child Within

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    The Child Within

    The child within is trying to get out,
    She's too deep and too weak
    I can feel her but, she don't speak
    She's hiding, the tears are blinding
    She hates the world for what she keeps, she tried to speak
    Now it's to late, she can't wait
    She's left this world, yet she can hear but can't feel.

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    angelbaby6900 commented on The Child Within

    08-05-2009

    I think that this poem was to much like a paragraph in a book instead of a poem

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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