The Beach

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    The Beach

    The Beach.......a loving place with endless space.........
    As I stand on the sand
    And hold my sister's hand
    I tell her abouth the fish
    And how they carry my wish
    She gathers her shells
    While I tell her my tales
    But....................................................................................
    The sun will set
    And cold I'll get
    The beach....A loving place
    .....always brings a smile to my face......................................

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    laydbak1 commented on The Beach

    08-11-2009

    This doesn't say so much as it conjures up a lot of memories of being there on the beach and all the wonderful sights and smells and sounds that just make you feel glad to be alive right then.. Nice short write..

    yermobutterfly commented on The Beach

    12-18-2008

    I love the beach. it is one of my favorite places to spend time

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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