Temptation

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    Temptation

    You Ain,t laughing now at temptation,
    It,s got you by the balls,
    Anything once is what you said!,
    Now you,vegotta have it all,
    You ain,t laughing now lik you use to,
    Your head is hangin kinda low,
    You aint got no body,
    And no place left to go,
    With only one thing on your mind,
    You,ve gotta have it time after time,
    Silver spoons and ringing bells,
    Leaving tracks from a train in hell !,
    Youve gotta hear that whistle blow,
    Nothin else seems to matter much,
    Just make another hole,
    No you aint laughing now.
    Aint laughin at temptation..........

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    Azzrella commented on Temptation

    09-26-2009

    Good poem but you need to watch your punctuation, and spacing. Looks like you might of been in a rage when you wrote it. You've got a , where a ' should be in several places.

    litldeer commented on Temptation

    12-25-2008

    Great!!!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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