Telling My Story

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Other

    Telling My Story

     I'm undescribable to many
    To some seen as a threat
    Others say I'm too cool and could care less about the world
    I say that I'm just me but no one ever wants to listen
    That's always how it is
    No one ever wants to listen
    My words are unheard
    My actions unseen
    My feelings don't matter
    So why do I even try anymore
    Works of good happily unnoticed
    Desires drenched in evil lust
    Wanting clearly the wrong things
    You wanted my story in 15 lines
    This is not even the beginning

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    StandingBear commented on Telling My Story

    08-28-2009

    A well written partial story, may take more than 15 lines so we will wait. Great beginning.
    Reply to Comment

    greenk0114

    12/13/2009

    I've been trying to find time to think of a middle and ending... And thanx :)

    Phatom commented on Telling My Story

    06-04-2009

    Note worthy words strung together, so when will you finish the epic so we can fully appreciate your poetic style
    Reply to Comment

    greenk0114

    12/13/2009

    Thank you. I'm trying to finish it

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    greenk0114’s Poems (23)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    The Player & The Game 0 08/05/2011
    A Vengeful Heart 0 03/02/2011
    The Heart of a Lover 2 12/20/2010
    A Sinner's Wish 0 07/23/2010
    Death By Centuries Passed 0 07/22/2010
    A Story Worth Telling 1 06/23/2010
    A Girl Like Me 2 06/22/2010
    What's A Little Fantasy Between Friends? ;) 1 06/04/2010
    In The Presence of a Liar 0 01/31/2010
    The Return From Darkness 1 01/17/2010
    Erotic Persuasion 4 12/16/2009
    My New Found Ways... 0 12/13/2009
    Only You 0 12/13/2009
    Unfaithfully Faithful 0 12/13/2009
    Wanting More 0 12/13/2009
    My Happy Ending 0 05/20/2009
    Telling My Story 2 05/20/2009
    I'm Fine 0 12/13/2009
    Raw Emotion 0 05/20/2009
    The Captive, The catcher 0 05/20/2009
    What else is there? 0 05/20/2009
    Something New 0 05/20/2009
    The Unknown 0 05/20/2009
    Top of Page