Tehe

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    Poem Commentary

    The shut up part? Yeah people constantly do that to me.

    Tehe

    I would be horrified by my stupidity,
    But it barely registers,
    Faulted to the bliss that entices me,
    It's impossible to measure,

    Completely unrealistic,
    Insanity at its point,
    The people i vent to are driven balistic,
    to shut me up they all conjoint,

    It is new to me,
    Though timely to all,
    A marvelous, horrid, to be,
    Contradictory with a inescapeable call,

    I need it,
    I want it,
    You see.

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    alaskawriter96 commented on Tehe

    12-22-2009

    Bravicimo!! so i'm commenting on my own poem..so what..:)

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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