Take A Chance

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  • Friendship

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    A poem about a new relationship.

    Take A Chance
    When there was only you and me
    Standing in the rain just trying to be free
    Waiting for the answers to come from within
    Oh won't you please take a chance with me

    When I feel like the time is running out
    I want to go away and scream really loud
    It's not what you say it's what you do
    That makes me believe
    Oh won't you please take a chance with me

    Reaching out, reaching out to touch the stars
    You and I will forever go far
    You'll always be my best friend
    And you're all I'll ever need
    Oh won't you please take a chance with me



    RjH 1999

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    basebeccaball commented on Take A Chance

    06-15-2009

    That was beautiful. *crying* That was very emotional. That poem is really good. I wish I had such talent like that.
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    CreatorX1

    06/16/2009

    Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Words from the heart. :-)

    justme8495 commented on Take A Chance

    06-15-2009

    you have put your hart into this.. it is put together very well.. I can see what you feek in your words...
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    happy63 commented on Take A Chance

    06-15-2009

    This poem made me feel like I was looking and listeing as him and a close friend was standing in the rain and I could see the time running out.And i began to shout. Hurry Hurry Hurry!
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    happy63

    06/15/2009

    Great!!!!!!!!!!

    MistyDawn commented on Take A Chance

    06-14-2009

    Mister CreatorX1, I believe your work is very heartfelt and well written. Thank you so much for sharing your soul.
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    jademelissa74 commented on Take A Chance

    06-10-2009

    Beautiful! Sensibility and Friendship, at their best! I love the way you manage to create a short, yet, beautifully written poem!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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