Submission

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    Submission

    So here we are, wishing this could last,
    Unforgettable experiences, of sorrow in our past,
    Being what we are, and scared to show the truth,
    Meaning to let go now, would that be uncouth,
    If time was our friend, oh the things that we could share,
    Seeing all the things of light, could give us quite a glare,
    Since there aren't too many things that we would enjoy,
    I feel like we were taken over by a viceroy,
    Oh how things they could be different,
    Now why don't we just give our


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    ccslim commented on Submission

    02-19-2009

    Chains of the past hindering submission. wOOt nice job!

    JRP23pt commented on Submission

    02-14-2009

    Nice sort of ironic submission is general what we give in the nme of love, but then retract.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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