Stone By Stone

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    Stone By Stone
    I have a wall you cannot see
    Because it's deep inside of me
    It blocks my heart on every side
    And helps emotions there to hide
    You can't reach in
    I can't reach out
    You wonder what it's all about

    The wall I built that you can't see
    Results from insecurity
    Each time my tender heart was hurt
    The scars within grew worse and worse
    So stone by stone I built a wall
    That's now so thick it will not fall

    Please understand that it's not you
    Continue trying to break through
    I want so much to show myself
    And love from you will really help
    So bit by bit
    Chip at my wall
    Till stone by stone it starts to fall

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    SatansAngel commented on Stone By Stone

    05-19-2009

    That was amazing! .. I seem to have that wall as well. But that was a really nice poem. Like really! I loved it!
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    Bethane1978 commented on Stone By Stone

    01-25-2009

    Great poem. I liked it.
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    CHURV commented on Stone By Stone

    01-22-2009

    nice work and a big inprovement,great job
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    bforibus commented on Stone By Stone

    01-22-2009

    very good. and i rarely give a 10.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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