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    stars

    yver wished apon a star
    And made a wish that seemed to far

    Have you ever dreamed of your prince
    And when he left you've been sad ever since

    Have you ever dreamed of your perfect life
    But your dreams were slashed as though with a knife

    There went that life, that man that wish
    thats when you say in the sea there are other fish

    But what if it was that one man
    no one could replace him only he can

    so now i say to count your blessings
    learn well and remember you lessons

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    gogant commented on stars

    06-26-2009

    Why such forlorn poetry...are you really so sad ?

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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