A part of me

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    A part of me

    Tear drops fall down my face

    Falling into open space

    They just keep falling

    Always falling

    Never calling

    Never asking why

    Just dropping never saying god bye

    As they fall i sit quietly

    As they fall i feel lonley

    As if im loseing a part of me

    Oh why did they haev to go

    leavign me feeling this low

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    FiloRozzell commented on A part of me

    03-31-2009

    been there too.

    bforibus commented on A part of me

    03-26-2009

    the emotion was deep and the poem was very well written. towards the end u had a few spelling errors. like u were rushing, but all in all very good write

    syed commented on A part of me

    03-26-2009

    this is amazing stuff.......... I can see a great poet shaping up ........ great going

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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