Finding love

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    Finding love

    The sun Shines upon my heart
    Pullign Me up from the dark

    Hel is all i can see
    he sees me for me

    I couldn't tell you why
    But it had to be this guy
    His Eyes like stars in the nigh sky

    He sweeps me off my feet
    With his voice so sweet
    My face flushes with heat

    Wishes are all they are
    Wishes that seem to far

    sUnInThErAiN

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    FiloRozzell commented on Finding love

    03-31-2009

    slow down baby so much time for that...Loved it

    bforibus commented on Finding love

    03-26-2009

    very excellent write. i love the happiness in this poem

    syed commented on Finding love

    03-26-2009

    LOVELY.

    janetdawson commented on Finding love

    03-26-2009

    I remember when i felt this way. This is very sweet

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

    sUnInThErAiN’s Poems (5)

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    stars 1
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    Finding love 4
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