Star

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    Star

    I try to reach that special star
    But it is there and it has bars
    For the star has been taken
    When I see the star, I wish it to awaken
    For it likes me, but loves another
    I really don't know why I bother
    For I trying to reach that special star
    Hurts more and more leaving me a scar


    I wrote this poem at age 16. My very first poem. As you can read I had a crush on someone and like all crushes, my heart was crushed.

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    SILKYTWEED commented on Star

    07-06-2009

    Aww, sorry to hear about the unrequited crush, but I like the expression thru this outstanding write...at age 16? WOW, very expressive...thanks for sharing!

    ivecute77 commented on Star

    11-23-2008

    i've been in this situation before, so i can relate to this poem. verry nice.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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