Standing, Crying, Dying

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  • Confusion

    Standing, Crying, Dying
    I am in a crowded room, but
    I'm standing alone
    I am sorrounded by millions, yet
    I'm standing alone
    I have my friends, even though
    I'm standing alone

    I seem happy outside, but
    I'm crying inside
    I like my life, yet
    I'm crying inside
    I show the real me, even though
    I'm crying inside

    I am living my life, but
    I'm dying inside
    I am breathing, yet
    I'm dying inside
    I am here today, even though
    I'm dying inside

    I am in a crowded room, but
    I'm standing, crying and dying alone
    And it's oddly okay

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    tinygirl commented on Standing, Crying, Dying

    02-05-2009

    you have a very unique gift sorry i havent read in a while come and read some of mine i think you would like reality
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    EyemMatt commented on Standing, Crying, Dying

    01-14-2009

    it's been said that life isn't easy, well then neither could be growing up, not for most people. keep smiling, and definately keep writing.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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