Hidden By Tears

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I wrote this when I needed another poem for my forensics performance

Hidden By Tears

Darkness
Pain
An echo
You speak “hello?”
There is no answer
    No one there
Have you been forgotten?
    Left all alone?
You desperately search for a light

Another echo
    Your vice asks “hello,
    Anyone there?”
    No answer
Realization seeps in
    And darkness closes around
    The pain begins to seer
You’ve been left alone
    To fight the battle hidden by tears

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FranzJ commented on Hidden By Tears

02-25-2010

lonelyness, fear and tears - fear of being alone nice

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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