Standing alone

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    Standing alone

     I stand alone
    with my hands folded
    I hurt to the bone
    And my life has been molded

    Please don't forget
    the day you pledged
    your love for me
    I simply can't forget

    I stand alone with myself
    No one can begin to feel
    what I have within myself
    So yes I want to peel my
    skin away to reveal my
    heart and how it's breaking
     

    Thank you for letting me
    experience the pain of
    standing alone just to
    be free of myself and
    The person I finally want
    to be by standing alone

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    rkgiebler commented on Standing alone

    06-06-2009

    Standing alone - You really feel like your standing alone in this poem. You can feel the pain. As you read this, you come to realize that you can not free yourself of yourself and you can never become someone else. You just remain your same ole self with the same ole pain. A person obsessed with their own being and circumstance. Sad indeed.
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