Song of Separation

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    Just a song I wrote on separation. Hope to perfect it with your help.

    Song of Separation

    Here's a song I write to you sanely in love

    I wanna write you fast and short

    That my words may reach you sooner.

    Whenever you feel our love's boat in rough weather,

    Think that it's just a passing storm;

    That the serene season isn't far.

     

    Yeah this is my song I write to you sanely love.

    I close my eyes to see you laugh.

    I whisper the words you ever wanna hear.

    I say them over and over that you may hear.

     

    Here's that song I write to you sanely in love. 

    When I think that you belong to time and place another,

    Or that I know nothing of your thoughts, 

    I feel a tinge of envy not part of love,

    Or is that what they call love?

    This is my song I write to you sanely in love.  

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    gogant commented on Song of Separation

    03-11-2010

    We sometimes have a hard time with the true meaning of love...but, maybe we are better off not knowing.......let it be as it is..............g
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    abraham

    03/12/2010

    We all accept we don't know what true love is but we all think we know what love is! Thanks gogant for passing by.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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