snow ghosts

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    Charlie23 commented on snow ghosts

    04-28-2011

    I enjoyed your poem, dancing hawk! Made me think of a huge plow clearing a beautiful mountian pass.
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    dancinghawk

    05/05/2011

    lol ... beautiful AFTER the storm :) tho storms have their own beauty, for sure ... ty so much for the read and the comment, Charlie23! -dh

    rosehunter commented on snow ghosts

    04-11-2011

    I like the way you used so many literary elements. They didn't crowd each other out--the onamotapoeias and alliteration and etc., it wasn't all too much; everything worked together rather well. nice imagery, as well. i see empy nature, then the city, and fast snow blurring all the streetlights...
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    dancinghawk

    04/12/2011

    those big machines can sure move, lol ... and i'd just returned from a harrowing roadtrip ... so i'm sure some of that energy found its way into this piece ... thx for the note, rosehunter! -dh

    StandingBear commented on snow ghosts

    03-25-2011

    DancingHawk, an absolutely brilliant seasonal changing poem. Love the rhyming flow cascading from winter into spring and the snow ghosts are a nice surprise! StandingBear
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    dancinghawk

    03/29/2011

    thx, Darlin! it was a fun one to find ... penned in November ... woot! thx for the note ;) -dh

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