Rain Magnet
She lay on her back looking at the sky,Rain Magnet
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Tags: Nature
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(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com
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stellar commented on Rain Magnet
10-28-2009
- Reading this one and putting my view of the persona here in your poem makes me feel free and one with the universe
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10/28/2009
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Stryx commented on Rain Magnet
10-23-2009
- Your moods are compelling - and they resonate on my heart.
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10/23/2009
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Memenomac commented on Rain Magnet
10-21-2009
- Great poem, to attract the clouds and rain is a true gift. And people are afraid of what they don't understand and try to destroy it. A vivid memory for me is being at Sundance this summer, the first day at daybreak in an intense thunderstorm, the dancers and eagle whistles blowing...it haunts me. Thanks for sharing
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10/21/2009
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Grito commented on Rain Magnet
10-18-2009
- Thunderbirds array a flash of yesteryear, of yesterday. A distant thunderclap awakes me.
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10/19/2009
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graceladymn commented on Rain Magnet
10-18-2009
- Beautiful melodic flow to the whole piece. How simply divine to drink in the rain with every pore becoming one with it and the Earth craddling her and the rain like a womb of becoming. An enchanting word is trust. A poem that warms the reader. Thank you dh for sharing it here.
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10/18/2009
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