Slip Away

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    Slip Away

    Have you ever felt like dying?
    Just to liberate yourself from this tragic nightmare
    A world full of sorrow and pain
    Death and despair
    This residence we call “home”
    Is there no better place?
    A place where I don’t have to hide
    Where I can be me
    And no one else
    A place where I’m no longer judged by the likes of the ignorant
    Free to live in peace and harmony
    To smile a genuine smile once again
    A place where you can hold me in your arms
    Not for protection
    But because you want to
    A simple dream and nothing more
    I yearn to see it yet another time
    But as I try it continues to slip away

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    quickwrite commented on Slip Away

    09-29-2009

    That's a great poem you wrote, keep up the good work.

    Shenelle commented on Slip Away

    08-10-2009

    I like it. I don't love it that much, because I think something was missing in the poem.

    MAFLongfellow commented on Slip Away

    07-30-2009

    "YOUR SORROW SHALL BE TURNED INTO JOY" IF YOU LET JESUS BE YOUR REASON TO LIVE HE WILL GUIDE YOU INTO PATHS OF PEACE AND HARMONY. KEEP YOUR EYES ON JESUS AND KEEP WRITING..GOD BLESS, POET FRIEND, MARILYN

    btandntmom commented on Slip Away

    05-09-2009

    This is so me. We share a common bond. Please read some of mine and you will see.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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