Our story

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Our story

no more sadness
no more pain
no loneliness when i think of his name

no empty void
no unsure bliss
no dark hole where i cant see his face

i lose myself in his body
i drown in his heart
i dream in his thoughts which are connected to mine

he kisses me so gently
he holds me so close
his breath is soft music to my ear with his moan being my defeat

we pause in this moment
we drift to the beat
we are tangled in ourselves without fear

i give him my whole
i give him my past
i give him my life with all of my virtues

we reminisce on our history
we hope for our future
we endure our now

this is our story
this is our romance
this is where we are, who cares when it ends


                                                              our story is now gone
                                                             our romance has ended
                                            all erased by mistakes our future is no more

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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