SHOWED ME ANOTHER WAY

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THIS IS A POEM FOR ANY WHO HAS TRIED AND WANTED TO COMMIT SUICIDE BUT GOD GAVE YOU ANOTHER CHANCE TO GET IT RIGHT THIS TIME. LIFE IS PRECIOUS DON'T EVER TAKE IT FOR GRANTED BECAUSE TOMORROW IS NOT PROMISED TO NO ONE.

SHOWED ME ANOTHER WAY

TODAY WAS THE DAY
THAT I HAD IN MY MIND
TO END MY LIFE YOU SEE
AND NOT FEEL PAIN OF MINE

I PRAYED FOR GOD TO FORGIVE ME
FOR WHAT I WAS GOING TO DO
I PRAYED MY FAMILY WOULD UNDERSTAND
THE HURT THAT I WENT THROUGH

SO NOW THE TIME IS HERE
I TOOK SO MANY PILLS
I FELT A SENSE OF PEACE
NO LONGER WANTING TO FEEL

NOW I LAID DOWN
AND WAITED FOR LIFE TO CEASE
I GAVE UP ON LIVING
NOW TO REST IN PEACE

I FELL INTO A DEEP SLEPT
ONLY TO AWAKE THE NEXT DAY
REALIZING I WASN'T DEAD
GOD SAID THAT I SHOULD STAY

AT FIRST I WAS SO ANGRY
AND SO VERY MAD
THEN GOD SHOWED ME HIS PEACE
AND THAT LIFE WAS NOT SO BAD

I STILL HAD PAIN AND STRESS
AND PROBLEMS IN MY LIFE
BUT GOD GAVE ME HIS GRACE
TO NEVR LIVE IN STRIFE

NOW EACH DAY SINCE THEN
I THANK GOD EVERYDAY
THAT HE SPARED MY LIFE
AND SHOWED ME ANOTHER WAY.

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The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

MZQUEENB’s Poems (10)

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SHOWED ME ANOTHER WAY 0
I DESERVE TO BE LOVED 0
TAKE A CHANCE ON LOVE 0
ALL I HAVE LEFT TO GIVE 0
FOR GUIDENCE TO LEAD THE WAY 0
HE BROUGHT US TOGETHER YOU SEE 0
THE LOVE BETWEEN YOU AND ME 3
I SEE YOUR HALO 1
ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL 2
FOR NOW AND ETERNITY 1