ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

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    ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

    YOU ARE SO VERY SEXY
    SENSUAL TO THE TOUCH
    JUST TO SPEAK YOUR NAME
    SAYS SO VERY MUCH

    WE TALK ABOUT SO MANY THINGS
    I FEEL SO COMFORTABLE WITH YOU
    LOOKING DEEP INTO YOUR EYES
    SHARING PASSION SO VERY TRUE

    WHEN I SPEAK YOUR NAME
    A MILLION ANGELS SING
    WHEN I FEEL YOUR BODY
    YOU RULE ME LIKE A KING

    I LOVE THE WAY WE SHARE THINGS
    AND WHEN YOU READ MY MIND
    GIVES ME DEEP UNDERSTANDING
    THE DIRECTION WE’RE MOVING IS FINE

    I WANT YOU AS MY BEST FRIEND
    THAT IS THE MAJOR GOAL
    A DEEPNESS THAT’S SO CLOSE
    OF ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

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    phatdaddee commented on ONE WHO MOVES MY SOUL

    08-13-2009

    Great write! The rhyme pattern is wonderful and the content is good! I truly enjoyed this!
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    MZQUEENB

    08/14/2009

    I am glad you enjoyed my poem, keep the comments coming and thank you very much....Beverly

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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