Show me the Ocean

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    Show me the Ocean
    I propose we sit and gaze at a distante sun, enjoy the ray's
    of light. No longer hurting from past pains, but relieshing in the joy of
    living life. With a burning fire fueld by a desire to inspire and leave a
    constant impression; not just a memory.
    Show Me The Ocean !

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    Orchid commented on Show me the Ocean

    05-29-2009

    Ahhhh very nice, right up my alley. Another awe inspiring poem. And boy is it hot outside. I am truely inspired to for a swim. Your good.
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    mcstrasphalis

    05/31/2009

    thank you for time and consideration

    StandingBear commented on Show me the Ocean

    05-29-2009

    Brief yet yielding to the promising ocean view. "No longer hurting from past pains" ________ Great write, 9
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    mcstrasphalis

    05/31/2009

    yo keep up the good work dad and i'll do the same thanks

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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