Short Short Story of A Childhood

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Short Short Story of A Childhood

I grasped for happiness with fat fists
Feeling only vapors slip through my fingers.
That odd mixture of cotton candy compliments
And the filthy stench of rejection.
The rough brush of my mother's touch
Lasted just for a fleeting moment.
Yet long enough to painfully stir up
The emptiness in my aching soul.

My deep grey eyes soak in other mommies
Reflecting their tender offerings to daughters.
Soft shoulders to always lean on
Never minding the messiness of tears.
Mommies holding out their very hearts
on open palms-gifts to their baby girls.
Pain flashes through my "baby doll" eyes
Knowing even then the role my mom had
Molded herself into held none of the
Beauty of God's handiwork in her.

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RJOBOYLE commented on Short Short Story of A Childhood

09-28-2009

Deep I like the discriptive style , vapors have a certin feel. You add yet another poem to my growing collection of favs great poem

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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