Self appointed breakdown.

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    Self appointed breakdown.

    Love and hate filling my head, when will it all end?
    Love and Faith filling my grave, how full will it get?
    these things running through my head.
    Dealing with it has gotten to bo too much.
    Am I falling from my personalized grace?
    Closing in all around me, can I survive?
    confinments, restraints and demands on me prove to be too much.
    when will I reach my breaking point?
    My self appointed breakdown?
    An angels face cracks and her is sole set free, why not me?
    when will it be my turn?
    To explode, to expand, to be set free?
    flowers bloom, you on your broom.
    My coffin made, my pelloe laid.
    Moons smile because I fall.
    Mountians dance because I can't.
    Love and hate filling my head, when will it end?
    Love and faith filling my grave, when will it fill?
    Am I falling?
    Am I calling?
    Am I sad?
    Am I glad?
    Am I hateful?
    Am I Grateful?
    These things mean so little to me, how will I ever know what is relevant?
    Love and hate filling my head, when will it end?
    Love and faith filling my grave, how full will it get?

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    DeepEclipse commented on Self appointed breakdown.

    06-04-2010

    Tight vent. Reminds me of the feeling when the shit gets too much. Like there's not enough space in your brain to keep the thoughts straight. Enjoyed the read.

    Ariel

    06/05/2010

    Thank you, that one has never gotten good feedback I really appreciate it.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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