Scary Thoughts

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  • Angst
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  • Suicide

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    Scary Thoughts

    My heart falls apart
    and it's about to become dark
    thoughts of cuts
    or I'm going to die
    and I'm afriad of sad good-byes
    only one small cut and I'll be done
    but then I look at the knife again
    I can hear it call my name
    my brain has lost control
    my thought are cold
    I feel so alone
    only thinking of the one that hurt me so
    they say he's not worth the pain
    but I feel a diffrent way
    and I'm afraid of the things I've become willing to do
    and I'm terrified of what I might actually do

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    ravenrose commented on Scary Thoughts

    09-23-2009

    its very good. i like ur style . as ive said just wait it out ur still young

    KoriTsuki commented on Scary Thoughts

    09-22-2009

    o.o wow, um...hopefully this is about all of the guys you dated, other wise I'm in trouble

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