Horrible Secret

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I was in 5th grade wen i wrote this. and yes i relize i didnt keep the ryhming up till the end.srry

Horrible Secret

Somethings been happening
I really can't say
But i really just wish someone would tell him to go away
He says things to me I dare not repeat
he does things to me to me I wouldn't wish on my enemy
He's like a nightmare and I just can't wake up
He'll grab me and throw down to the floor
He'll do things to me I'm just not ready for
And when he's threw I'll cry
I feal like a whore
And I always ask why me?
Why can't I tell?
Why can't i just ignore the threats?
How long will he continue?
Am I the only one?
And every answer I think of only make me feal worse
So bad I feel like running away or going to a diffrent world
This secret is to horrible to tell

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CasimirJash commented on Horrible Secret

09-24-2009

speechless and sadness, letting out the feelings in kind of telling, I hope somebody hears your cries and dry those eyes. wonderful poem, filled with emotions

ravenrose commented on Horrible Secret

09-23-2009

im sorry. ive had a bad child hood as well. i made a promise to my goddess when i was 13 that i would never let a nother guy touch me if i did not want to. its had but just keep standing tall

dual commented on Horrible Secret

09-23-2009

You will survive this... thank you for sharing... I am sure that someone will reag your words and know they are not alone. You have a great talent!

ErikatheVampire

09/23/2009

thnk yu tht means a lot God Bless

KoriTsuki commented on Horrible Secret

09-22-2009

=O so sorry erika, must of been a hell of a child hood.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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