Broken

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Yearning
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  • Depressed
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  • Letting Go

    Poem Commentary

    EEK! SO DEPRESSING!!!!!!!

    Broken

    Look what you've done
    Look where i am
    living a life of hate and torture
    this is all because of you
    I trusted you
    gave you my heart
    I thought I was safe in your arms
    but you dropped me
    I hate you
    I love you
    I'm lost without you
    I don't want you
    but I do
    help me
    someone
    someone other then you

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    angelchaser commented on Broken

    05-23-2012

    I know exactly how you feel and you conveyed yourself very well in this piece.
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    jenifer commented on Broken

    05-22-2012

    sometimes even when ur abused u feel these words , like the blow that comes to u
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    ravenrose commented on Broken

    09-23-2009

    nice. im had my share of heart breaks, i have like two. i just lost my sister to day. i have a peom bout her on my page. its good.you will learn when u get older, heartbreaks never really soften just keep ur head high
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    KoriTsuki commented on Broken

    09-22-2009

    Cool, hope thats not about me tho, cause then...well it would be hard to talk to you
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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