Save Me

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  • Sadness
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  • Love
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  • Pain

    Save Me

    Please be the one to save me
    I don't want to be alone,
    And if you cannot help me
    then please just let me know.

    You do not have to lie to me
    that only makes it worse,
    You do not have to ignore me
    i've been battered with hurt.

    But if you can take my hand
    then pull me from this place,
    find my heart and fill it's empty space.

    I cannot take this lonliness
    i feel so trapped
    caged in tears and trepedation,
    find my smile
    reveal it's location,
    bring back my laughter
    for it's been gone too long,
    build me up again,
    make me strong,
    find my joy
    taste my love,
    hold me tight,
    don't let go. 



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    daydreamer23 commented on Save Me

    07-16-2009

    beautiful poem its darkest before dawn and the sadness and loneliness will pass stay strong,bless.

    Mangus commented on Save Me

    07-15-2009

    I enjoyed this one a lot. You described the feeling that so many have perfectly. If we could just things without the drama. Things would be so much better. Nice work!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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