REVOLVING LOVE

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  • Love
    • YVONNE
    • JUST COMING OUT OF A STORM BUT I SEE THE SUNLIGHT CRREPING THROUGH!!!!!!

    REVOLVING LOVE
    FUNNY THING?
    HOW LOVE CHANGE
    PEACEFUL MOMENTS
    THEN PAIN,
    CONFUSION GAINED.
    TIME TAKEN FOR BROKEN HEARTS
    MEMORIES GIVEN
    RECURRENT THOUGHTS
    UNTIL THE END
    REMAIN FRIENDS
    THEN-
    PEACE, PAIN CONFUSION,
    TIME, BROKEN MEMORIES
    RECURRENT THOUGHTS
    UNTIL THE END
    AGAIN,MY FRIEND.

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    muttman1 commented on REVOLVING LOVE

    01-06-2009

    well written i will enjoy reading more of your thoughts
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    Phoenix9 commented on REVOLVING LOVE

    12-03-2008

    very well written
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    orsonav commented on REVOLVING LOVE

    11-14-2008

    nice flow and image. Keep writing.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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