Relative Consept

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    Relative Consept
    Live life like there is no tomorrow
    For there may not be.
    Live life with joys and sorrow
    Enjoy the things you see.

    Life is a relative concept
    Nothing real, nothing fake
    Your life is not set
    It’s your choice to make.

    The power is within us all
    To choose the path we take
    Remember if you fall...
    Another choice to make.

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    CMarsh commented on Relative Consept

    09-27-2009

    Nicely done! But the ending leaves me hanging. Stiil an awesome job.
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    ladypoe

    09/27/2009

    Thank you. The point of the ending is to leave you hanging :). For me, it means do you remain down when you fall, or do you get up? A choice each person must make.

    jadienblu commented on Relative Consept

    03-11-2009

    very inspirational...
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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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