Redemption

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  • Lost Love

    Redemption

    what am i to you some portal to help get you through,

    odd ass times in your life ,never good enough

    to be the one holding your hand in the end

    a no win situation ,tell me why

    is it because i'm too real ,give you shit that you gonna feel

    take time to get to know me,show me that i belong to you

    this is my redemption, my life is worth much more than i
    know

    worth much more than you show, we can take it slow

    whisper in my ear tell me what i'm doing wrong

    i sing to you my life's song

    redemption, i just want it to be me and you

    love me or loose me i will only go up from here

    my redemption is near, i'm being sincere

    this is your last chance to love me,i am saying this to you

    as much hurt as you feel, this is nothing compared to
    what i've been through

    you say i've changed well you've changed too, i cant be
    that girl you dont see

    i have to move on and claim my redemption for me PEACE.

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    Quiboi commented on Redemption

    08-01-2009

    Wow really hit home for me your words are what I am trying to explian...

    Darkfire commented on Redemption

    06-11-2009

    So simple simple, yet so intrique, it is a weird feeling, the way it is written makes this poem specially unique, good job.

    4everboom commented on Redemption

    05-23-2009

    I really like this poem, I hope that he understood what you were trying to say. you have talent and you should nurture it and develop it. I don't think I compare to you, your really gifted.

    kitap2006

    05/31/2009

    THANKS WE ALL ARE TALENTED IN OUR OWN WAYS BUT THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH

    xVITALxSTRAINx commented on Redemption

    05-13-2009

    Beautiful poem right here 10/10 all the way!

    NayInLove commented on Redemption

    04-25-2009

    this was so real!! perfect 10

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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