Redemption

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    Redemption

    A Man begs for Redemption
    A Second chance
    A Man finds Religion
    When Life Seems at an End
    When God grants Mercy,
    A Man takes Advantage
    When God ignores Man's plea
    Man curses god in Arrogance
    Shameful how the human mind expects forgiveness
    When the situation was a mechanism of his own sense
    meaning that every situation,
    we put ourselves in
    Why should God grant Atonement and Free Will at the same time?
    Who knows? Who Understands?
    Not the Selfish Human Mind...

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    EyemMatt commented on Redemption

    01-12-2009

    Outstanding. Maybe He shouldn't, but he does out of His love for His creation. I just read an intersting book, 23 Minutes in Hell. It's right up this alley. Keep up the good work.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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