4play (stage 1)

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    4play (stage 1)

    Look at you... so cute
    I want to touch you
    adore you
    adorn your body with my hands
    my eyes
    my lips between your thighs
    my fingertips run down your back
    searching for your spot
    your essence
    my lips give your neck reverence
    you quiver
    my tongue gives your body shivers
    and you tip...toe
    back and forth in my vision
    my rhythme becomes your rhythme
    we're breathing
    so close
    I can feel your soul
    you are my host
    I am your parasite
    I thrive on your insides
    my sustenance is your pleasure
    I feast as you whither away
    and fold into me
    mold into me
    hold onto me
    as we become one being

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    fennesse commented on 4play (stage 1)

    03-26-2009

    very very nice.You make the rhythm tangible keep it up!I say 10

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