Re-delivered

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    Re-delivered

    Crisp white sheet of
    Pristine perfection

    An awakened spring leaf
    Unfurls in the crook
    Of my arm

    Your new life

    My eye is
    Mirrored
    In your liquid pupil

    I stare

    Mesmerized

    Into a deep pool
    Of ancient memory

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    NayInLove commented on Re-delivered

    01-28-2009

    Nice!.. maybe add a little more..but still nice :)

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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