Lost

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Lost

The age-fog hangs in heavy drapes
Around your head, a cloudy gauze.
  Your memory of my love escapes
Through mist and murk that seal the doors.

  Your white and whispy hair I stroke
 And whisper words of long-lived love.
Though shafts of sunlight prod and poke
They'll never pierce the gloom above.

Now sitting at the window you
Avert my gaze, my touch resist,
You cannot reach what's close or true, 
With glassy eyes you face the mist.

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heavenlymayday commented on Lost

09-09-2009

That is gorgeous and heart wrenching. So sad! I love the way that you used your words.

Corinna commented on Lost

01-01-2009

I'm fast becoming a fan!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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