"Sweet Fine Strands"

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This song was born in the fall of 2007 in Dolgeville , NY.. There are currently two versions of this song - the fast hard rock original and the very cool jazz lounge version only recorded in the final Powerhouse sessions of March 6 2009.

"Sweet Fine Strands"

"Sweet Fine Strands"

Verse 1:
There's something I've been meaning to tell you girl..
Your beauty enlightens my dark world.
I've come to realize that you dont feel the same for me..
So I'll go back to the rock from under which I came.
I fantasize of you ever so perfectly.
The rectitude in the symmetry of your face just cannot be denied.
Because every angle in you is right my queen..
And I just dont understand why you choose to keep my heart under you throne.

Chorus:
Everlasting is the longing.
Everlonging needs to last me
Until the day when you would ask me to run my fingers through those sweet fine strands.

Verse 2:
Your voice impacts as if it were a gun.
Surely injuring if not killing me.
Enlodged in my psyche, you've become.
So I hold my head sideways to try and bang you out through my ears.
You're killing me but it makes me feel reborn.
I cannot find the words inside that I could've used to describe.
The every hue of you is a color personified from my dreams.
A quite imperfect rainbow but unlike any other on which my eyes have gleamed.

Bridge:
Tonight, we've begun our flight.
Imagination is a drug.
it filters us through the air.
As two hearts in one - where I want to be is where I am..

- Jaymes Garden

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