"Ordinary Star"

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This was the second in the three song series..  It was born in April of 2008 in New Hartford, NY shortly following the Adirondack Memoirs sessions in Utica, NY.

"Ordinary Star"

"Ordinary Star"

Verse 1:

With such a powerful center-
You rival the ways of a quasar -
If I'd be - I'd be inside of you.
You are every alpha signpost star-
The heart of your constellation.
You're on your way - You're on your way.
You're going supernova -
So unstable - collapsing in.

Chorus:
Massive star nearing the end of its life.
Colorful series of explosions.
I can't wait - I can't
She'll boast a beautiful nebula.
That surrounds a dwarfed ember that resides within.

Breakdown:
So faint but so dense-
We'll make it make sense-
Present and past tense-

Verse 2:
What you have shown through the prism-
Stifles no rays with no days off-
In every phase I sway long side of you.
You are every constellation's heart.
The beauty is known through my vision.
We're on our way- Lets be on our way.
We're going supernova.
We're so unstable
We're collapsing in.

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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