Quite mind

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    • there is always a reason for things to happen the way it does, although we do not necessarily understand it ....

    Quite mind

    Peace of mind…

    Feeling of calm …the Divine.

    Absolute reflection dipped in observation.

    Definite conviction unmoved by the motion.

    Affirmatively rooted extending all branches.

    Actively progressing until each stem flourishes.

    Not refusing to see .... the light of certainty.

    Heart fully open to the touch of His bounty.

    I inhale, I exhale ... releasing admiration.

    Breathing along the essence... the potion.

    Its soothing effect caressing my soul.

    Gently envelop it for a stroll.

    Sensation of the moment.

    I grab it ...I attempt.

    With an audible sigh

    A glance at the sky

    Finally I find

    Peace of mind

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    laydbak1 commented on Quite mind

    08-11-2009

    A very nice communion of soul and rightful acceptance of reality as it comes, to insure tranquility and harmony may reside inside... good write...
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    ummi

    08/13/2009

    Thank you for having taken the time to immerse yourself into my words and understanding the message that I was trying to convey ... Salam

    RheaTigerhall4 commented on Quite mind

    08-05-2009

    The flow from one line into the other was very good. It I very lyrical at least to me it was.
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    ummi

    08/05/2009

    Thank you for your time and feedback for quiet mind ... it was definitely how I felt at that time.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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