prince charming

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    prince charming

    the sky seems so bright i close me eyes,
    the  night seems so long thinkin of those lies.
    so i escape through my mind writing on these lines
    waiting for prince charming to sit by my side, rewind!

    the sky seems so bright i close me eyes,
    the  night seems so long thinkin of those lies.
    so i escape through my mind writing on these lines
    waiting for prince charming to sit by my side, in my mind!

    one point in my life i couldn't express
    the pain and anger i felt so i locked it in my chest.
    i always felt out of  place so looked futher away
    then it seemed the moreout of place the futher i stray.

    once upon a time i found him my friend
    he allowed me to release my talents within through a pen.
    after i found this he taught me not to be afraid
    and i knew that ill neva be betrayed.

    hell keep all my secrets just the way i wrote them
    won't say a word to a soul of what i told him.
    his lips sealed and tounge twisted tight,
    he swept meoff my feet and i opened up to him every nite,
    no worries no fights just paper adn pen so i could write.

    hes so special he dried my my tears before i cry,
    already had the truth written down before i heard the lie.
    he was on point i was full before i ate,
    already asleep before it got too late, awake.

    he tucked me in my covers so tight,
    my heart fell asleep not heavy but light, clear sight.
    i never worry about what tomorrow will bring,
    a kiss wakes me every morning from prince charming.

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    knight4696 commented on prince charming

    09-06-2009

    WOW!!! Great Poem - Great release! I Loved it! Even with some grammatical errors. A 10 from me!!! Great work Alice! Keep Writing!!! Don't you dare stop at 4 - Your keeping us all longing for more!!! :)

    AmorCyan commented on prince charming

    08-07-2009

    I like this poem it's creative. The content is well constructed. It started out well and the whole poem flowed together.

    aliceogden

    08/07/2009

    thaanks, i usually have to make myself stop writing because if i dont then my poems will be really long.

    starjumper2004 commented on prince charming

    08-07-2009

    Wow... That was an Amazing poem! I've never read any poem like it before, all the one's I've read are normally all "depressing" stuff, but that was really good. I wish I could escape life sometimes in my dreams! However I normally have nightmares so that's not an option, so I make the best of what I can in the world outside my mind :)

    aliceogden

    08/07/2009

    i usually have poems that are saad until i got rid of the father of my baby and distanced myself from my family, but thanks for writing!!!

    StandingBear commented on prince charming

    08-06-2009

    A beautiful work relating a fantastic saneness of mind. Great write.

    aliceogden

    08/06/2009

    thank you, you really inspired me to put more for show

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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